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Comission: Inflatable Pump (Dolphin pooltoy TF)

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A comission for :iconpvtkibbins: of him and me turning into Dolphin pooltoys. On the picture he asked me to put pump on myself. I have no idea what is it for and then i end up becoming a pink dolphin pooltoy as my collar dropped and him becoming purple ones.

After the changes i am sad because i cant fly anymore on the sky, i know i can turn back someday when the dolphin bodies broken completely but when? or if it destroyed by something.

But, then for the next days who knows? I might end up enjoying it XD

I hope u enjoyed it, i dont know if i did it good enough first time doing dolphins and a pooltoy tfs in same time. How do we look?

Please comment and fav if u like it so i know if there are some do
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Before I do anything I'm going to explain my choices and why.

Vision 4.5: I don't really know why I picked a high number but I would say that TFing is a solid topic to talk about and theorize since every person would react in a different way and people would look at it in a different way, for example, me I want to know how it affects them mentally, because on the outside everything could be fine but on the inside it could be like a bomb going off, the only problem is this falls into the trap of "over wording/ voicing" when you make most of the dialogue useless by saying everything the person is thinking and feeling as the TF happens, though this can be a good thing if used correctly.

Originality 4: I see lot's of TF's and a few pool toy ones here and there but I can't say that much about this topic seeing how it is a commission and I don't know what the person wanted and what was changed and everything else, but I'll give you the benefit of how well you paid attention to detail that I will talk about later.

Technique 5: Now about the detail in this work, I have not seen drawing like this for a bit and it's a nice refresher to see something new instead of what I always see, I noticed on the last panel that you have what looks to be the sun reflecting off both pool toys which is a nice detail that you focused on, speaking of sun light it seems in every panel there is a lenses flare I'm not sure if it is or not but whatever it is it blinds the eyes a little and takes away some of the colour, like in the first two panels it seems fuzzy and like there's a light being shined in my eye, although this could just be me, but it works very well in the last panel to show that they are out un the sun and gives a general placement of the sun and from there we can guess the time of day, why anyone would want to know is a lost one me but some people do want to know, in closing about the lenses flares I say keep them, just tone them down a little so it doesn't take away from what's happening.

Impact: I choose 3.5 because I don't see many pool toy TF's that has that "what if" feeling, for example we know you feel sad and the other one is happy about this turn of events but also we know whenever and wherever you pop you will turn back into your regular form, but that could be at any point in time I'm just going to list a few that are highly possible, sitting out in the sun to lone and popping, kid comes and pops you, guy takes you for his own and leaves you out during winter in his pool and you pop, etc. but the problem is I don't feel very sad, I mean at first I was then I read the comments and saw that when you pop you turn back, so that took away some of the atmosphere.

I hope this explains my choices and I hope this helps you on your way.